
Whitby Abbey (by Nuno Lopes via Creative Commons)
Arriving at Whitby
For hours the land belched sheep,
as we crossed boot-sucking maw until
abruptly the town gusted up our noses
Coming down from high ground,
we caught that whiff of Whitby through
a bitching rain – Nick and Dev and me
A sea town smell so subtle almost dreamt,
before the Abbey uncrouched in our faces,
Hild’s ghost a speck in eyes of empty windows
So delivered by rough uncounted steps,
via walls of curled embedded stony snakes,
we crossed an unseen border into a postcard
Where neither Captain Cook nor Dracula,
came out to smile toothily or wave hellos,
a bleached whalebone arch would have to do
Followed by great big greasy bags of chips,
an old man cursing on a little boat,
a scattering of Goths, pale pub-pilgrims
Bobbing in a crowded flaking bar
where drinkers came and went like tides,
including me, when I had to slip away
Heading for the harbour, past St Mary’s,
down toward a solid block of pier where
I stared but failed to fathom the North Sea.
Once Through A Window
Dull horizons over winter trees
stand silent in rain which doesn’t fall,
cropped grass in a yellow-brown number
is unimpressed by a child on a bicycle,
racing down its back, laughing at lazy gulls
suddenly loosing their wings.
A large crow in a gnarled tree
is unconcerned with drifting balloons,
welcomed by shrieking girls in rooms,
whose wide eyes watch them fade;
a kestrel who shouldn’t be here, buzzes earth,
And the colour of the day remains discontent grey.
love the first poem better.
visual and beautiful verses..
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Two lovely poems, the second one grabbed my attention a bit more! Interesting and creative! Loved to be here!
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